Please see attached my evaluation for my opening sequence:
Im pleased to have everything completed, but there is one or two changes that i would have liked to make looking back on the opening sequence, that being adding in the sounds of the door slamming and a gunshot at the very end of the film, which i believe would have made the concept clearer for the audience but i did not have time to add in.
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Naomi,
Please ensure your evaluation powerpoint is visable to the public and it is uploaded properly.
Mr B